Wilson and The Magical Little Bird
Long ago in the far away land, there lived a man named
Wilson that lived in a tree house.
Covered with trees and deep in the middle of the forest, is where this
man hunted for his food, gathered berries, and spent most of his time. Although he was lonely much of the time, he
liked the peace and quiet from the wilderness and often made friends with the
forest animals.
It was a quiet Thursday morning and Wilson was awaken by a
beautiful song. Wilson had lived in
these same woods in the same tree house for many years and never heard such a
wonderful sound in his life. He set out
to find who was singing this song.
Only a few meters outside of Wilson’s house is where he
found a bird perched on a glowing golden mushroom. Frightened at first, Wilson gazed around the
tree to hear the bird’s song and figure out how the mushroom was glowing.
Days go by and the bird returned to the mushroom and sang
the song every morning. Wilson would
wake up to the sweetest songs and watch the bird as it sang and lit up the
mushroom.
One day, Wilson wanted to meet the bird. Typically, Wilson was never a shy man and he
could make friends with the animals very easily, but this was not the case with
the bird. Wilson was nervous but finally
gained the courage to talk to the bird.
The bird was friendly but did not want Wilson hearing his
songs. The little bird explained to him
that the songs hold great powers. Not
only were the songs beautiful to the ear but they can also make a human never
age. Although the songs had different
tunes, the lyrics all stayed the same.
“It is only himself that can control his own actions, everything is in
his control,” the bird sang. As the bird
sang, the mushroom began to glow brighter and brighter.
Wilson asked the bird to stay and sing to him everyday. Flattered by the compliment the bird agreed,
but under only one condition. Since the
bird’s songs were so beautiful and the songs could make anyone stay young
forever, if anyone found out about him, he knew they would lock him up where he
could no longer fly free in the skies.
The bird made Wilson promise that he would never tell a soul.
Months go by and Wilson and the bird became best
friends. The bird sang to him every
morning and they lived happily and young.
As the seasons began to change, Wilson had to travel to the nearest town
to gather supplies that he could not find from the forest. As Wilson traveled, the bird stayed in the
tree house and guarded the area.
Wilson was not the most well-liked person in the town, so
upon entering, Wilson knew he had to do something that would make him feel
accepted. In order to buy supplies from
the general store, he had to make friends with the storeowner. With nothing to offer, Wilson did not know
what he was going to say or do to make the storeowner like him. A light bulb turned on inside of his head and
he knew he had to tell the secret about the bird, the beautiful song, and
staying young forever. Astonished, the
storeowner quickly accepted Wilson into the shop, but the secret spread like
wildfire. It was all over the town and
Wilson became the spotlight. Wilson
loved the attention, but deep down, he also felt very guilty about breaking the
promise with the little bird.
News spread to the King of the Village and he wanted the
bird at once. A private dinner was set for Wilson and the King and the King
wanted proof about the bird. Some people
were skeptical about the bird but Wilson knew if he could just show the people
in the village, then he would be accepted forever. Wilson agreed to bring the bird into town and
show the King and all of his people.
As soon as Wilson returned home, he and the bird set out to
go back into town. The bird sang to him
the whole way. “It is only himself that can control his own actions, everything
is in his control.” Wilson and the bird walked through the gate of the King’s
castle and everyone gathered around. The
little bird did nothing. The little bird
did not even make a little mushroom grow.
The little bird did not sing or say a word. The townspeople were upset and felt like they
had just been played. They gave Wilson
the benefit of the doubt and gave him until sundown for the bird to sing and
work his magic to keep them all young.
At dusk, there was still no peep form the little bird. Wilson did all he could to get his little
bird to sing but nothing worked. Furious,
the King threw Wilson into the pit of dragons where he was eaten. That next morning, the little bird found a
mushroom, perched up, and started singing while the mushroom grew brighter and
brighter. “it is only himself that can control
his own action, everything is in his control,” sang the little bird. Everyone looked in awe and realized Wilson
was telling the truth. Although the
little bird felt bad for the death of Wilson, he also knew that he broke the
only promise that they had made from the very beginning of their
friendship. He knew the control was in
Wilson’s hands and his actions would reflect the outcome of his life. The bird explained what happened to the
townspeople and then flew off into the middle of the forest where no one could
find him, and the little bird was never seen again.
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Author’s Note:
As I read this story, I automatically fell in love with the
original. I loved the characters in it
and I loved the message and moral behind the story. Being truthful and sticking to your word is
something that is very important especially in friendships. I believe that can
make or break a friendship, too. I kept
the setting the same as the original story but changed the characters a little
bit. In the original story, there was a
turtle playing a harp instead of a bird singing. Also, I added in the part about the song and
the bird being magical and keeping everyone young. In the original story, the man was beheaded
but I changed that to being thrown into the dragon cage because I felt like
that was a better fit for the story since it included Kings and castles. I wanted to keep the underlying message of
the song the same, but I did reword the song to a jargon that we use today in modern
times. The Hunter and the Tortoise
Bibliography:
"West African Folktales" by William H Barker. "The Hunter and the Tortoise"
Hi there! I really enjoyed your story. I also liked the change you made, from being beheaded to being thrown into a dragon cage much better. Beheading is so intense, the dragon cage was still powerful but not too overboard. The story was excellent and your writing was really good!
ReplyDeleteHey Alyse, I really liked your story and the moral behind the story! I also agree that you must be truthful and always stick to your word. Sticking to your word is one of the things i value the most as a person because it allows me to show people that I am a reliable and honest person. I also agree on how this could break friendships if these two things are not practiced. I really enjoyed seeing how you changed the character to a bird and how wilson was thrown into a dragon caged and eaten. Your writing is very good from what I have read, and I am excited to read more from you!
ReplyDeleteI really liked your story and the way you adapted it to make it your own. Although the changes are small, they make your story unique. I think this story has a very important moral and I like the way you framed it. I was a bit confused about your setting. When you said that Wilson lived in a treehouse, I pictured a tropical place. Then you said her visited the general store which brought modern times to mind. Then there were kings and dragons. I kept having to switch settings in my mind. It might be better if you set the scene in the first paragraph...Wilson lived in a forest outside of a kingdom, etc but you could put it much more eloquently.
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